My errors

(1)
Hello,everyone. （Ok）
Hello, everyone.（Bad）

↑I must need to have space between word and word.

 (2)
I am university student .    (Ok）
I am a university student.  (Bad）

↑I must have added an article.

(3)
day1  (Ok）
day 1 (Bad)

↑It is a same mistake in (1).

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